1) Work on concluding essay - I need to be less repetitive with my thesis statement in my conclusion and I need to engage readers. By that point of the essay I need to put more effort in, I kind of try to finish it as fast as I can. The conclusion is a vital part of my essay and needs to enforce the thesis. I’m going to put more effort into elaborating on my conclusion.
2) Elaborate of quotes - I’m not good at integrating quotes. The hardest thing for me is getting all my ideas down on paper. They’re floating around in my head, but I struggle with translated my thoughts into coherent sentences. I’m going to outline quotes before hand and make points on all things related to the quote.
3) Proof read - I always skip this part, but I need to put time aside to go back and look at my essay AFTER I have finished. I kind of go through the essay as I’m typing, but that’s not always the most viable option. I should also consider printing it out and editing. I did ask someone to edit for me, but people are not as mean as they should be and I just got a “wow! that’s so good.” So I need to find someone who can actually help me edit.
